Wow.. very good! I think that is an excellent song. I really loved the topic you wrote about. Once again.. Great job!

"How you feel about them before it's to late,"
'too', not 'to'
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"And were all trying the best we can,"
we're needs an apostrophe, otherwise that sentence would get too confusing
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Nice philosophy, it read a bit more like prose than anything else really.

*Cries* This Was Beautiful...I Relate To This Poem Tons..
Tomorrow you could wake up,
And someone you love could be gone,
And you never got to tell them how you feel,
So tell everyone you love,
How you feel about them before it's to late,
Even old friends tell them what they meant to you.

One Of My Good Guy Friends Just Died...We Were Boyfriend And Girlfriend At One Point And Then I Really Don't Know What Happened So A Few Years We've Been Just Friends...But To Be Honest I Really Loved And Cared About Him And I Never Told Him...And Now He's Dead....And I Regret...Not..*cries* I Miss Him......
Anyways This Was Beautiful And The Emotion In This Poem Was Beautiful 5/5
♥
Steph

So deeply touching and emotinal,brought a tear to my eye well done much luv lynne

Awww.. a thought this was a good message and a sweet, thoughtful poem! a pleasure to read..

How you feel about them before it's to late,
^ should be "too" not "to"

And were all trying the best we can,
^ should be "we're" not "were"

nice job, very enjoyable read! 5/5

Nice message to be spreading. I'd like to hear it put to music, because the way it's set out appears to be fairly complicated, thanks to the mixture of long and short lines.