Music

by Ariana   Jun 21, 2006


The music
carries me
back
to before.

It takes me back
to when
I believed.

I'm trying
I'm trying
so hard to
let go.

But these melodies
soothe me
remind me...
of you.

(Please don't take away my music).

The last line doesn't fit in, I know, it's that way on purpose :)

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  • 18 years ago

    by See Through Silouette

    I really liked how you used something that everyone loves and relates to, and created something of your own. Also how you made something only heard, have strength. Great work! xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    I love this... music is my life andi think the way you portrayed the way music can make you remeniss in the memories and feelings..... and i agree with the other comment, i love the last line simply because its so out of place yet it fits so well

  • 18 years ago

    by put the [boom boom] into my heart

    I really like this....especailly how the last line seemes a bit abtract and out of place...it adds to the feel i think....good work xo

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