I really like this....especailly how the last line seemes a bit abtract and out of place...it adds to the feel i think....good work xo

I love this... music is my life andi think the way you portrayed the way music can make you remeniss in the memories and feelings..... and i agree with the other comment, i love the last line simply because its so out of place yet it fits so well

I really liked how you used something that everyone loves and relates to, and created something of your own. Also how you made something only heard, have strength. Great work! xo