Awsome poem, really touching, i really like it.your a great poet, so keep it up

Very touching poem, i could relate to every word, well written, keep up the good work, much luv lynne

Short and sweet yet full of emotions. I can feel the disappointment and fraustration in your writing. Good work! Keep writing. 5/5

This was a very sad poem Robert! This girl doesn't know what she's missing!! I know many people can relate to this piece.

murder me not but please just stop this heart
every beat of it explodes my memory apart

^I loved those lines.. very original.. and thought provoking! Great job on this write!!
-Kristy (Krissey)

*Chelsey and I would really appreciate it if you would check out our latest collab, "Two voices unheard." It's under the name, "Krissey." Thanks!!

I am soooo sorry! I pasted the wrong lines!! I feel so dumb now.. :P