Not your greatest, but pretty good nonetheless. you're really shaping up to be an excellent writer =]. Hah, trust me, I've felt this same way before, like everyone is just watching as shit happens to you, and no one's doing a thing. You just gotta solve, or try to solve the problems on your own. I'm here if you wanna talk....

p.s. it's 6 04 am over here, and I haven't slept since yesterday morning, so I'm a little out of it...

Whoa! my favorite so far i think! i loved it and i know exactly what you feel like. and ppl are watching us.....oh no! lol....great job...
love ya lots,
sore

I LOVE IT this is awesome