Great poem! Its filled up with emotion and is very deep, I would say its fab.
xoxoxo Haley
ps thank you for your comment

Hey thanks for the comments and well this was a really good poem showed alot of emotion i just have one suggestion maybe you should try seperating it a bit more it seemed kind of stuck together to me but just a suggestion

Awww this is excatly how i feel.....love it babe 5/5

Wow wut a n amzing poem i can totally relate to ! keep up the amzing work :) mld