Omg i can totally agree. its like u wrote this poem just for me! how kind of u! stalker...lol jk. wow amazing work! 5/5 for SURE!

This poem is so sweet, and well written. I love it entirely. The ending is very special, I think it's perfect for the poem.

XoXo
Gaby

Man I've felt this way one to many times :( THis poem is one of those that many people can relate to , it says what a lot of people are feeling or have gone through in their love life! I enjoyed reading this poem, very well written!
5/5

Awww, this poem was so sweet!!! I have feel this way now!! It was cute the rhymes seemed a bit forced the flow was good!! Overall 4/5!! Well written!!

Awww, this poem was so sweet!!! I have feel this way now!! It was cute the rhymes seemed a bit forced the flow was good!! Overall 4/5!! Well written!!

Very nice poem:)

Aw that's sweet! I love this bit:
"whilst I'm thinking all these things
I'm subduing the pain they bring
because you love her"
To make the flow better you could try and make it roughly the same amount of syllables in each line...
- Polly

PS - I haven't enough time to comment the other nine poems tonight lol but I will get on to it tomorrow! Thanks for commenting mine I appreciate it! =D