That was a pretty cool poem. I liked how you wrote the different feelings people have about deal, and how the reaper can not afford to take sides, or serve any perpose except the continuing stream of time. This poem made me interested in writing or reading a poem written in the reaper's point of view about his task in life, and what he has to do. It is a lonely job, but that poem could go in a number of different ways. This was a mos interesting read.

-Tainted

Tainted kinda took the words out of my mouth.
this poem is really good, it doesn't seem like you're "new to this creativity thing" , it seems as if you have been doing this for a while .
you should try writing the reaper's side of the story
OR
maybe i can do it, i think i'll attempt to write one from his side
keep writing
~HazE