by Nelle Jun 22, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
How could you say that to me? |
by Jessica
Aww.. keep your chin up hun! this was filled with emotion and it really shone through.. the flow and some of your descriptions could be improved though.. |
by LadyPearl
Pretty good, it could go under the love section too. One thing you can improve, add more imagery. |