You know, I feel the exact same way...sometimes we are unable to save them all even if we try and try and try...I look at some people situations and wanna help so bad and blame myself for not helping when really, there was nothing I could do! But sometimes...we just have that feeling..we know those who we CAN help..and never hold back..we can save some people perhaps just by offereing a smile! I love how your heart feels for the loss of these people whether their real or not! Great write!
Chelsey-Lynn

It saddens me that I have not been able to read more of your poetry.
You have a talent that shines though in even the saddest of poems.
The message is clear and the flow is perfect...it was such an enjoyable read and I almost let a tear slip

God, this is amazing. I had chills throughout the entire thing.. just, wow. You are an amazing writer and I envy your talent.

Beautiful, touching poem. Keep it up.

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We can't safe the world, but some times we can make a difference, like you did by writing this poem!!! I love it and it sends out a great message and it touched my heart....Excellent hunni, but sad and deep!!!

Much Lova Sabrina

Oh my God! This poem tells the stories of lives that have been lost, and its like you speak for the people who lived and ended them. I think it speaks for us all, and how lives of depression and misunderstanding can lead to such an abrupt end. Great Job Hun. I loved it and was close to tears. Much love!

Aww this poem got me on the verge of tears Tainted! Beautiful words, horrible truth, everything about it is so upsetting. I always wish the same things you are thinking. If only we could help all the troubled ones these days. I swear I am at a loss of words to describe how much I love this poem! Everything about it is unique and beautifully sad! It should be published to show that there are a few people out there, such as yourself, who care and understand. If only we could change the way things are seen in the world today...if only. Keep up your fantastic masterpieces! 5/5

We all beat ourselves up about situations where we feel we perhaps could have done more to help an individual. You get this across really well in the poem, but I'm sorry: the negativity played too deep a role throughout which means (and to me personally I mean) that you offer NO solution, or that you should have kept it shorter.

Excellent! this poem was great, i luved it, an can completely relate to it, so many of the people around me who i care about have suffered an ive felt so guilty, an u expressed this so way. u hav a beautiful soul, an that in itself is so much, an u should always feel like u,ve done all u could, even by recognising there are problems u are doing so much more than so many. love your poem. great job. kate.

Though the length could have been shortened it was pretty good. Giving a name to what happens to many was giving it a more real aspect. Though it just shows what happens to people and the helplessness that accompanies those who want to help. Rather original with what it was about. Nice playing with that idea.
~Faith

Wow im crying

just think to yourself could you have saved them???

beautiful poem
i loved it

lana

Wow i loved loved loved it.

i have chills and tears. its sad that there are so many of us feeling like one of those kids in the poem. It was truly beautiful and very emotional i just loved it.

You are a truly kind hearted soul to be able to see and express the emotions that so many have felt, this understanding and caring for people makes you an amazing artist! Keep it up, and thanks for the comment by the way.