Our World Now

This is a very true poem. I love it when people write about the world's problems, because no one ever does! The whole way through, an element of sasdness held on strong. This poem gave a good sense of the world's need to change. I think what made it even more sad was that no one actually tries to stop it in this particular piece...good job!

I think I agree with Sean Allen probably. that was a beautiful poem! hey, by the way, you and sam were officially the last two on that topic. lol I said it was locked, done for, but you two and briana are exeptions! lol GREAT JOB ONCE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!
- "Bloomed Rose"

If you get trapped in thinking about it, it is hard to stand the world we live in because of all the crap the goes on all the time. I have felt that way quite a bit, and have ranted about it. When I was little and people asked me what I wanted to do when I grow up, I said I wanted to change the world, to make it a better place, and I still do. *now if only I could find a way to make the world listen* I can understand you sentiments for writing this poem, they make a lot of sense and are shared by many, including myself.

-Tainted

Very different...but the words have such meaning...this is such a wonderful poem

This was so well witen in an unusual style but it worked so well, flowed perfectly well done much luv lynne