How I Feel About Him

by Rain   Jun 23, 2006


When I'm down your laughter makes me smile and I no longer frown.
You're my sunshine on a gloomy day,when there is darkness you light my way.
Your eyes are like a secret passage to heaven,you're on my mind twenty-four-seven.
If at night I can't sleep,I think of your voice soft and sweet.
My world just wouldn't be the same, if I couldn't say your sweet name.

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  • 17 years ago

    by chind

    Really sweeet =]

  • 18 years ago

    by emmerz

    Awww this is adorable! And it explains ...love so well! I think it would be awesome if it was longer as well, but its great just the way it is. Keep writing for sure!
    ~emily @->-

  • 18 years ago

    by LaLaROX

    YOUR POEM IS NICE IT WOULD BE BETTER IF IT WAS LONGER BUT GOOD JOB I LOVED IT

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