by Sorefromreality Jun 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You told me not to cry |
by Ike Dizzle
Man that sad. 5/5 |
by lonelynow
I like the way you have used that one line in every verse, but in different places. Another brilliant poem- well done. |
Awsome poem, it took me back to when my boyfriend and i broke up so i could relate to the poem. |
by Tammie
Woah really good. i think there was only one part that either i read wrong or didnt quite flow. other than that, great work. keep it up! i can't wait to read some more. |