by Jessica Jun 23, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
A big caring heart |
Awe, this was truly very sweet. However, it is evident to see how much you have grown and advanced as a poet in the space of just under a year. There's nothing wrong with this piece, but in comparison to your newer stuff, there is a big contrast. |
by Rachel
Awwwwwww a really sweet poem it made me think of how much I love my mum!!! |
by Megann Lee
Awh, that's cute. I loved it. I thought it flowed well too. :) |
by Darien
Awww beautiful poem. You write a great dedicaiton to your mom. Good stuff :) |
I love poems about peoples mothers. it's so sentimental and has a lot of value to me. beautiful, truly inspiring. |