That was so cute!I loved it and im sure your mother will love it even more.It was very touching indeed.Keep writing like that!
xx

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Hmm. It's hard for me to comment this due to personal things.

But, as a poem, I thought you did good. You expressed really clearly how much you care for your mother. All I can say really is, never lose that relationship with your mum. It's hard without it. Great poem Jessy! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I love poems about peoples mothers. it's so sentimental and has a lot of value to me. beautiful, truly inspiring.
rock on

Awww beautiful poem. You write a great dedicaiton to your mom. Good stuff :)

Awh, that's cute. I loved it. I thought it flowed well too. :)

Awwwwwww a really sweet poem it made me think of how much I love my mum!!!

Awe, this was truly very sweet. However, it is evident to see how much you have grown and advanced as a poet in the space of just under a year. There's nothing wrong with this piece, but in comparison to your newer stuff, there is a big contrast.

A cute read. :]