by jello Jun 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
There you are again |
by C Cattaway
I'm not sure if I read this correctly.. are you trying to let go, or do you have an image of that perfect person, that you can't find..? Either way, I liked it.. I do agree with Willow, and think that the flow will change dramatically if you re-word it.. If I read it correctly, I hope that I get to that stage where I can start letting go of the one I love, and start to move on, to where he is only a memory, before I become bitter from the pain of my broken heart. Excellent write, hunny. 5/5. xx |