Comments : Darryl (part one)

  • 18 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Wow that's really sad. A good lesson in not to smoke

  • 18 years ago

    by thiswas2006

    That was a really sad and heart wrenching poem.
    I hope your uncle survives.
    Keep writing!
    Wishing you god's grace.
    KUTTAN

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Pipp

    Thanks for that Kuttan but he died about a month ago now. =(

    Pip xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Such a sad poem smoking just isn't worth it excellent 5/5