Save me

by we_all_live_to_die   Jun 23, 2006


Life support has reached zero,
im floating through space,
I think im going to die,
are you out there?

im all alone,
I reach out for you,
I dont even know your name,
please come save me,

save me from the darkness,
save me from all the pain,
save me from the horrible past,
save me from myself,

a tear runs down my cheek,
a knife cuts through my wrist,
blood flows down my arm,
I know ill die alone,

even though I dont know you,
im already afraid,
that one day ill lose you,
im afraid to die alone,

will you save me from my fears?
save me from the darkness,
will you please prove me wrong?
dont let me die alone

3rd stanza edited thanks to Talee =) thanks

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Nicely written. I thought reaching out to a stanger in fear of dying with noone by your side was what made it all the more depressing.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Excellent emotion. It is a horrible thing to die alone. Great job

  • 18 years ago

    by eveofcoleman

    Hey well this is my first comment for you and thanks for showing me this sit ebtw...ummwell i like this alot...because i can relate to the not dying alone...thats prolly my biggest fear

  • 18 years ago

    by brkendown

    This is well writen great job! thanks for the coments!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good.. Two lines that really stood out to me were:
    I reach out for you,
    I dont even know your name
    I loved that. Great job on this. 5/5*

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