Well. at first, the opening didn attract but as i was going thru the poem i loved the theme and how u put ure words.a great job.
love,
wsihy

Great piece... I'm a huge fan of the notebook and have read the novel more times than I can count, along with the motion picture. This is a great companion to the novel and I find a very passionate tale in this poem. I particularly liked:

"My soul will find yours...
like those as times of olds.
Like a weary knight on his horse...
Seeks___till the secret unfolds."

Beautifully edited. Many more pieces to come from you I hope?!