Oh Night!

by PURE HEART   Jun 23, 2006


Why this time is holding my hand,
why it is not ready to pass-by.
My heart has stopped beating as if,
the reason to beat is lost in a sigh.

I am eager to hear your voice,
which makes me feel you are near.
I just close my eyes and think about you.
And my cheeks can feel the wetness of my tears.

Holding my pillow and giving it a hug,
makes me feel in your arms
But I feel something still lacking,
as this pillow cannot give your warmth.

This night seems so long to me.
a second passes like an hour.
I miss you at this time my beloved,
so I spend the night looking at the stars.

Oh night! Please get over
or make me sleep soon.
As its hard to spent the time
just staring at the silent moon.

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  • 16 years ago

    by nandini

    Nice poem... loved the way u ended it... :) Keep writing more!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sourav

    Great job Bharti! Great concept... I think very universal from the love's point of view... May be... Someday I'll write a poem on this!

  • 18 years ago

    by John Pickett

    That was great .I feel like that a lot with my love.

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow!!that was well emotioned and so passionate i lvoe it but its sad how you miss your loved one i loved the ending that was the best thing about it i lvoe the was you said oh night and so on i loved your sentances you used amazing work of art here xoxroxyxox

  • 18 years ago

    by candace

    This is a really good poem love it(u should take a look at mine) 5/5