by PURE HEART Jun 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Why this time is holding my hand, |
by nandini
Nice poem... loved the way u ended it... :) Keep writing more!! |
by Sourav
Great job Bharti! Great concept... I think very universal from the love's point of view... May be... Someday I'll write a poem on this! |
by John Pickett
That was great .I feel like that a lot with my love. |
by Roxy
Wow!!that was well emotioned and so passionate i lvoe it but its sad how you miss your loved one i loved the ending that was the best thing about it i lvoe the was you said oh night and so on i loved your sentances you used amazing work of art here xoxroxyxox |
by candace
This is a really good poem love it(u should take a look at mine) 5/5 |