Damn i hv been through this for sure and every word is like coming from my past...just loved it and could definately relate to the situation here, great write my friend...

all the best and take care

Oh wow.. that was just beautifully written.... kinda like what i feel during the night... lol
Love can be tough sometimes...
Very well written Bharti... keep it up....

Much Love,
Ipsita

I just liked the way you ended your poem...it was so beatifully thought and written...Nice poem.....take care and keep smiling always...

The silent room....i know how that feels like yaar....5 aur 5 fanastic poem yaar

luv ya

Wow great poem. l love to read it.

This is a really good poem love it(u should take a look at mine) 5/5

Wow!!that was well emotioned and so passionate i lvoe it but its sad how you miss your loved one i loved the ending that was the best thing about it i lvoe the was you said oh night and so on i loved your sentances you used amazing work of art here xoxroxyxox

That was great .I feel like that a lot with my love.

Great job Bharti! Great concept... I think very universal from the love's point of view... May be... Someday I'll write a poem on this!

Nice poem... loved the way u ended it... :) Keep writing more!!