Intgriquing and beautiful. Having had to ponder this one and put it together...I appreciate the intimacy and intricacy of it. Awesome job.

Oh wow that was a great write. Very deep. Flows nicely.

I really liked that poem, its different from the style i usually read, but it was very well put together

Wow, this was a very well done poem with a cool message and a brilliant set up. It is funny how we have multi-personalities sometimes, or even when out desire and our common sense colide with one another. Or our past experiences conflict with our future wants and hopes and dreams. I really liked this poem.

"but I fear myself for those bricks
and I'm afraid the concrete hardened my heart"

This section right here, wow, that was very powerful. It made the internal conflict work really well. A nice poem hun!

-Tainted

How do you do it? I adore this poem. The way you break your feelings down always leaves me in awe.

These lines absolutely rock:

"a sleepy headed yoga class that forgot to relax"

"But hey, I'm just a misplaced poem never found,
a girl still learning mishaps are sometimes allowed"

Truly outstanding. Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow im very impressed. i dont even know what to say. i love it. !!!