Duality (Two Haiku)

by Sean Allen   Jun 23, 2006


Gentle winter wind:
frosty kisses slowly soothe
overheated minds.

Bitter winter wind;
she freezes my joints until
I can write no more.

    report violation
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  • 18 years ago

    by Kevin Dizzle

    Hey thanx for sticking up for me in that contest i started, but didnt finish

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    You write haiku's very well, I really enjoy reading them. Good job Mr. Sean Allen, very good. 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow, this is great. I've read it about 20 times now and it just gets better and better...lol.
    I love the second stanza but I feel like either one without the other would be missing something...if that makes sense?
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Nice imagery. Good Haiku.
    2 for 1 deal ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Last Angel

    .oOo. I liked that. Very well written. Great imagary. Beautiful.

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