Dancing with Wolves

by Sean Allen   Jun 23, 2006


It's now 4 AM
and you still haven't returned;
can't sleep till you do.

Guys.
I know
all the lies
they cycle through;
I can sympathize--
why won't you realize,
I know what you want to do--
so get your head out of the clouds,
I need you to stop being so blind.

Each morning the sun decides to rise,
you think He does it just for you.
Well, I've spent most of my life
trying to keep you from
befriending some snake.
So this time I'll
just watch you
dance with
wolves.

Based on how you act
I think that mother should have
named you Eve instead.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Wooh I so disagree with sammycakes! ^^

    I thought the longer and shorter lines were really affective and it didn't affect the flow at all in my opninion, it was still great. Is it a particular type of poem I love the structure of it.... Take care 5/5
    - Polly

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ok...I gave this a 4/5 for many reasons. I really didn't get why you put longer lines and much shorter lines at the beginning and the end. There was really no flow at all, and no rhyiming scheme (rhyming was most likely intentional). This poem just...didn't really interest me much. Sorry if I'm being kind of critical. =) xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Kevin Dizzle

    Hey thanx for sticking up for me in that poem contest i started, but didnt finish..... ur awesome....

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Ohhh.. I like the biblical allusion in this poem. It gives it a nice, clear message. Great stuff.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rain

    Lol, the last line was cool! i agree with souray too, it is differnt. its a little confusing though, but you get it after a while.

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