AWWW!! so sweet!! great poem!

Laura! My goodness....I have said this before on reading your poems, but the reason I love your work so much is you don't use the oridinary choice of words when you rhyme...You use bigger words which makes you a true and talented poet! THis poem was outstanding I mean the choice of words is what I loved because like I said before, after a while you get tired of reading "love", "hug".."girl".."world"..ya know what I mean?
Loved this poem and I'm so happy you have found someone who makes you feel that way!
Chelsey-Lynn
5/5

Wonderfully done Laura. Beautiful descriptions and splendid words.

Sucha a wonderful poem. Each and every line is so well written. Great work.

This is a wondeful and beautiful poem!
The first stanza was great. As soon as I read it, it hooked me right in. Your flow was also good, and your rhyming didn't seem to sound forceful. You used excellent word choice. Very nice poem. Keep up the great work. And, thank you for your comments. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

A very nice poem........

Very sincere. keep it up.

When I read the title of this poem, two songs came to mind. Air Supply and Richard Marx, they both had the title Now and Forever. I remembered singing Richard Marx - Now and Forever to my girlfriend.

This was a really sweet poem Laur. It could have been a love poem too, because you put a lot of strong emotions into it. I also liked the words you picked out for this one, they seem so natural in the poem, but it's words I rarely use in my everyday talks. Great stuff Laur!..

I enjoyed this poem a lot. I liked your choice of wording in your rhymes, not the same old words you see in every poem!! I definately need to work on that in my poems!! lol
It's nice to hear a happy love poem!! I don't care which poem of mine you read, you can take your pick. I am trying to branch out my writing.

Laura, "The heart of tenderness and depth, And soul that's perfect in grace and pure, A beauty that no one could ever endure, Except the chosen you has kept." beautiful emotions poem you penned here, yet very inspiration, thanks for sharing, and your beautiful comment.....have a great day! best wishes.

Dang!!! Girl, you had me all caught
up in this read. A very captivating
and wonderfully written poem.
The last stanza really knocked me out
and was like the icing on the cake.
Thank you for sharing and Write On,
Bogie

Although I did like the poem, the last stanza did not have the same rhythm as the rest. You still did a nice job. Again, I like the word choice.