Honestly its poems like yours that make it worth reading on this site. There's one thing i can say about this poem.......Oooh kinky :p. But more seriously, you've outdone yourself yet again, another fantastic piece. Congratulations on another poem well written!

Andrew

Experiencing the same as you Eraklis, even though it's not in person but the feeling can be so real more real than anything you have experienced. Passion , true passion is so hard to find..whene you find it ,you just know. Amazing poem one of my favourites. I can't wait to read more. : )

Damn that was real sexy* I liked it a lot check out my poems if u want* 5/5

Great poem..deep

HOLY MY GOSH!!! this is the best poem that i have come across on this site! like the first comment said, it is poems like these that makes this site worth while! i love this. . .the flow is good, the words rolled off my lips! it was in lack of a better word perfect! i loved it, if i could vote four million times i would lol
check out my work sometime and see if it's worthy of your approval lol j/k but really check it out and tell me what you think lol
~*~Amber~*~