Comments : You did it mum

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    Well even though I don't know you or your mother personally, I am proud of her too..I'm proud of any mother who can do that! I'm glad you didn't let this situation ruin your family! Makes me proud, truly it does!!
    Wonderful write!
    -Krissey

    P.S could you read "Some kids dont play" thanks

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥kazza♥

    Very well done i loved how you captured the emotin to this poem

    5/5

    kazza

  • 18 years ago

    by Green M&M

    Great job you did a really good job...............5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Awww that was beautifully heartfelt. I know how it could feel. Mothers like yours should be forever praised for their continuous efforts in life. Keep up the perfect work and thank you for your comment on my poem! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Very touching poem. Perfect way to end it

  • 18 years ago

    by Eugenius

    The poem is great! I really enjoyed it!
    You've described a very typical situation. The language is very beautiful and expressive.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hold Me

    Awww, wow this is a real well writen poem, i realy liked it, its so sweet xx