Thats an extrodinary poem.. its really sad and deep... but i like it alot. i like how the emotion is out there. i got a picture in my mind.. it had amazing flow... word choice.. and rhythm..i can relate to it.. i kno how u feel.. great job writing.. i wish i could write like this.. keep it up
take care
angie

What do you mean it was "retarded"?

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