This would make an interesting story. The thought of a girl living that sort of life is sad enough to just read about but to know that people really go through things like that is even sadder.

Oh. this heart of yours is so beautiful...i just had to say that..lmao..(its true its true!)
you look at other peoples sadness, and feel sad...and that is a good thing...and you pen it down in such a way that you make others feel sad too...and that is a great thing! (
not feeling sad, but your ability to move me, and others)
Love ya Chels
Dhaval

First of all I have to comment on your poem, "Until he was taken away" because for some reason I am unable to comment on love poems and friendship poems. That poem brought me to tears because that was my life. I has made a lot of mistakes, and everyone left me alone until I had nothing left and I was humbled enough to go to God and pray, and he saved my life. That poem was amazing and really really really touched me. Your poetic ability is incredible and I felt so much as I read your poetry. Thank you for that write.

This poem was also really quite amazing. I was reminded painfully of a dear friend of mine whose family is broken, and she is the glue that tries to keep it together and suffers a lot for it. This poem was so sad. It hurt to read it because I felt for her and I wanted to reach out and hold her and love her. I wanted her to know that there were good people in the world and those who would and could love her. This was another amazing write. Wow.

-Tainted