GREAT POEM!!-i feel the same way-it really connected to me-the wording and long sentences made it way better-great job u have a lot of talent-take care-~*Mara*~

Awesome poem i think every1 has been through that stage, keep it up and remember, when it comes to love everybody is a poet!

Thank you all for your compliments. I love writing poems and this one was my favorite and i am glad you all enjoyed it too. It makes me happy to read these things and find out what people think. :)

among your poems, this i like the most. short and sweet but so complete! keep it coming girl!

The best poem that I have ever read, enough said...

I love poems about dreams. Check out my poem "Glare". Good job

Wow!!! That was a great poem!! I gave it a 5!! I love all your poems!! Wonderful job!
Amy