I Write Sins...

by Little Dot   Jun 23, 2006


Sitting at a small desk
With nothing but a candle
To light the room

Crying over her notebook
Tears of deep sorrow
The young girl has lost her love

He left the party
With that other girl
Her sad eyes try to focus on the paper
As she writes out her story

He will never know how much he hurt her
She loved him and always will
She saw them together

It wasn't fair, she wanted him
She had to sit back and watch
As they danced and kissed

It will never happen again
She followed the boy home
And waited for him to fall asleep

Making her way up to the bed
She pulled out a knife and slit his neck
Crimson blood ran down
Onto his silk sheets

Now back home in her room
Crying tears for her lost lover
Knowing if she can't have him
Nobody can

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  • 18 years ago

    by ladypyro666

    LOVED the ending.... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by GONE

    Wow. The ending was very bone chilling. Great poem. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow. Very haunting/sad poem.

    You put a good twist on it. As I was reading it, I never thought it would end like that.

    I really liked the ending you had. She can't have him, and now no one else can either.

    you've done a great job on this! Keep it up =) 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked that poem, i think it was well written and really good
    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow... that was reallly dark. I love the way that you ended it. The flow and rhythm of it was really good and I just loved it from beginning to end! you did a great job on this! Definitely a 5/5*