You Think You No

by Frenesiia   Jun 23, 2006


You think you know
The right way to go
But everything goes wrong

You think you know
The right person to be
But everyone else disagree

You think you know
How to live your life
But the only choose is the knife

You think you know
What everyone need
But you never seem to succeed

You think you know
What life's plan is for you
But in a blink of ur eye you dont know what to do

You think you know
How to be grown
But you cant live alone

You think you know
Whats its like to be me
Well i disagree

You think you know
Everything
But when ur done thinking
What is there left.......

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  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very nicely done, now I think this is your best poem!
    Of course I can offer you some corrections but honestly this is a good write.
    Second stanza, last line should be "disagrees."
    Third stanza, last line it should be "choice."
    Fourth stanza second line, it should be "needs."
    Thats it! make those simple grammar corrections, then it's perfect!
    Well done, keep writing.

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