Comments : You Think You No

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very nicely done, now I think this is your best poem!
    Of course I can offer you some corrections but honestly this is a good write.
    Second stanza, last line should be "disagrees."
    Third stanza, last line it should be "choice."
    Fourth stanza second line, it should be "needs."
    Thats it! make those simple grammar corrections, then it's perfect!
    Well done, keep writing.