Enduring Pain

by Sarah Ann   Jun 23, 2006


Tell me that I'm useless
And that I waste your time
Tell me the truth about how you feel
If that's what's on your mind

I'll listen and won't bother
To explain myself some more
Because one day I won't worry
To say good-bye at the front door

And these tears I'm crying every night
Will blend in with the rain
For mother I am through with this
I'm enduring all the pain

(Not quite good or finished...just a vent for now.)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Vent or not...short or long, does not matter..I see absolutely nothing wrong with it the way it is now..if i was you, i would leave it, it's great!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    I do not think this poem isn`t finished, I loved it the way it was. You have a way of getting the meaning out without always using many words. That is something that I admire. Great job. Keep it up ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Okay first of all, I DON'T find it not finished or needs some more stanzas!

    you wrote it very powerfully and what I-mostly-like in your poems their short, meaningful words!

    just leave it like it is, for now!
    and keep the great work up
    ILY
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    For a poem that isn't finished yet. I thought it was pretty good.

    You could add a little more. But, I don't think it HAS to have more added. Great job! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

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