For a poem that isn't finished yet. I thought it was pretty good.

You could add a little more. But, I don't think it HAS to have more added. Great job! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Okay first of all, I DON'T find it not finished or needs some more stanzas!

you wrote it very powerfully and what I-mostly-like in your poems their short, meaningful words!

just leave it like it is, for now!
and keep the great work up
ILY
NemO x0x0x0x0x

I do not think this poem isn`t finished, I loved it the way it was. You have a way of getting the meaning out without always using many words. That is something that I admire. Great job. Keep it up ;)

Vent or not...short or long, does not matter..I see absolutely nothing wrong with it the way it is now..if i was you, i would leave it, it's great!!!