Cute hon.

I'm gonna be "over analystic" here.

DON'T USE DOUBLE WORDS.

haha they're bad...duhh.

lol j/k.

ilu. I'M SO GLAD YOU'RE HOME.

I loved how fast this poem was read! That last stanza ended it sad, but don't give up hope! I loved this poem and best of luck with whomever this is written for
-Krissey

P.S could you read "Some kids dont play" thanks!

Best of luck to you hun. It was a great poem and it made me kind of sad. It flowed ver well. Keep it up!

Ravyn

Hey that was just as good as the others. keep it up but like i read somewhere by someone dont remember maybe you are waiting for nothin but how do ya know your not waiting b/c god has something in store for you and this boy in the future. well good luck wit him. ttyl love it! 5/5

I like this poem alot it is a quick ready but packed with emotions. Keep it up.

Good poem with a quick flow and a hint of sadness. Keep it up! xxx