Day after day

by Krissy who i was then 2005 to 2007   Jun 24, 2006


Day after day
hour after hour
time passes ever
so slowly
it seems to never
end the pain
the hurting
inside wont
fade no matter
how hard you
try your tormented
by it
day after day

    report violation
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  • 18 years ago

    by Nat

    Short but simply direct

  • 18 years ago

    by {Alexander W.}=-ThX

    Not bad, but i dont want to give it a 4 cause that could turn into somthing very good. try lengthening the lines to make sence. and watch the number of syllables to make it flow. and get deeper! get it out... keep it up!

    Alexander

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