First True Love

by Mousie   Jun 24, 2006


Saying I Love You
Doesn't always mean it's true,
You'll get tired of him
And you two will be through.

Life will go on
Relationships come and fade,
Many guys will come your way
And soon you'll be ready to trade.

But that one guy
Is always there,
Through thick and thin
He's everywhere.

In your dreams
In your heart,
You know he's the one
That could tear you apart.

In the back of your mind
You know he lurks,
You love everything about him
Any flaw, any quirk.

He may not be all your firsts
First kiss or first dance,
But he'll be sure every day
To put you in a trance.

That's when you know
He's your big bear hug,
The one you want forever
Your first true love.

i hope you'll like this poem... sorta just made it up as i went along!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    Hey gurl sorry took me so long to check it out anyway it s really good i liked it alot and it doesnt sound like you just made it up as you went along its kinda proffesional. well ttyl

  • 18 years ago

    by gemowski

    This is a brilliant poem i can relate to this so much. nothing bad at all to say fantastic work.

    gema xoxox

    i gave u 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SomeonesAngel

    Nice rhyme scheme, oh and thank you for your kind comment on my own poem muchly apreciated. You have talent keep it up and you dont know where youll get. very talented and im happy for you 5*

    Ayesha

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Aww that's terribly sweet and cute.. It is also true, somewhere in our dreams there's always the one we want. Keep up your great work and thank you for your comment on my poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love the cute ending of this emotionally charged flowing poem

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