OMG I LOVE IT.
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT.

OMG I LOVE YOU!!

haha...he needs to see this hun.

ilu. joy.

Very Sweet My Friend...Indeed It's Great To Read

I liked this poem. It was really sweet. I think the fact that you made it up as youwent along has any relevance.

WoOt!
Ravyn

Mousie i loved this i have a first true love that i cant get over right now. but it was good poem not just good great! keep it up! oh and sorry not to good with knowing some of this stuff but i didnt know what sn is so just click on my name and leave me a personal or just email me i will leave that in your personal box. maybe i will see you on chat sometime. by the way did you have fun in AZ? by the way that poem you read was about me. but ttyl

I did love this poem, it was loving and sweet and pretty true too.
keep writing
xxxxxxxxxxxxx

I love the cute ending of this emotionally charged flowing poem

Aww that's terribly sweet and cute.. It is also true, somewhere in our dreams there's always the one we want. Keep up your great work and thank you for your comment on my poem!

Nice rhyme scheme, oh and thank you for your kind comment on my own poem muchly apreciated. You have talent keep it up and you dont know where youll get. very talented and im happy for you 5*

Ayesha

This is a brilliant poem i can relate to this so much. nothing bad at all to say fantastic work.

gema xoxox

i gave u 5/5

Hey gurl sorry took me so long to check it out anyway it s really good i liked it alot and it doesnt sound like you just made it up as you went along its kinda proffesional. well ttyl