That was an extraordinary poem I loved it. Great job
Keep it up
5/5
Breanna

Thanks for entering my competition i said i would comment on the poem everyone entered so here is. . .
loved this poem and can really relate you have said the same thing a few times but rephrasing it differently i liked this it got the point across without it getting boring the rhyme was good helped make it flow really well. itsalmost fun the depth of the obsession but its also deep emotionally cause the person really cares and that comes out in the poem, great job