A Normal Girl [No Longer]

by Arcane Blondie   Jun 24, 2006


Shes just that normal girl,
No one takes any notice of her dark feelings,
But at home its different,
The pain that she held in the whole day comes out,
Slides down her face in the form of salty drops,
Makes itself heard in the form of her screams,
For hours and hours she lets it all go,
Until she has no tears left to cry,
And her voice can no longer be heard,
At night she stays up thinking,
Her mind racing about the day to come,
She dreads the next morning,
Wishing night would be her eternity,
Hoping that maybe her life would cease to exist,
And she would be a normal girl no longer.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Many of ur poems are very gripping and heartfelt. this is no excpetion. i totally dig it. very kool.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    I really like this. I think when the subject "hoped that maybe her life would cease to exist" she felt kind of the way I sometimes do. I really liked it - again, can definitely relate.

    **Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Okay piece. More heartfelt than expected. A bit of the "more expected" yet had a small spin. Something that's not exactly original yet it is. The words revealed the actions of some of the images and gave a more....solid feel to the piece. Nice emotional spin with those images.
    ~Faith

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    I loved this..i can relate alot to this, i used to be like that all the time, day and night..i'm getting better now tho, i know how it feels and if this is true, i'm sorry! but it was a great piece!

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    Oh gawsh I remember those nights..I rememeber crying to my pillow every night..that was not fun...I'm so sorry you have to go through feelings like that but keep writing it always helps!
    Smile....your beautiful!
    -Krissey

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