Aww.. that was sad.. good job though.. it flowed well, used nice descriptions, and had lots of emotion.. keep up the good work! 5/5

I love it its sooo awesome it really touched me keep up the good work
~KaTiE

This poem was beautiful. You tell how you feel so well in your work. This poem came from your heart and how it feels, even without rhyme its a wonderful poem. Excellent job.

Oh gawsh I remember those nights..I rememeber crying to my pillow every night..that was not fun...I'm so sorry you have to go through feelings like that but keep writing it always helps!
Smile....your beautiful!
-Krissey

I loved this..i can relate alot to this, i used to be like that all the time, day and night..i'm getting better now tho, i know how it feels and if this is true, i'm sorry! but it was a great piece!

Okay piece. More heartfelt than expected. A bit of the "more expected" yet had a small spin. Something that's not exactly original yet it is. The words revealed the actions of some of the images and gave a more....solid feel to the piece. Nice emotional spin with those images.
~Faith

I really like this. I think when the subject "hoped that maybe her life would cease to exist" she felt kind of the way I sometimes do. I really liked it - again, can definitely relate.

**Samantha Hollywood

Many of ur poems are very gripping and heartfelt. this is no excpetion. i totally dig it. very kool.