My favorite of yours so far, this is amazong and i loved it! the plot was great and the flow was good to...u really stepped it up here. keep this stuff up girl...thx for ur comments,
love ya lots,
sore

Lovely lovely, and I like the title!

xoxoxo Haley

I loved this poem, it flows really well and I like how its allput together, and the last stanza was a really good finish..I loved it all around.
JBN

Aww thats so sad! yea the girl wouldnt knw how much she will be missed!!! thats so sad!

i loved the ending so much
keep it up!

Awwhh, that was sooo sad sweetie.. All of your poems are, but amazingly written! I love every one of them, they are so unique.. Truly great work hun, I love it! 5/5

This is brilliant... the plot is very well told and there is almost a message within the lines, subtle but strong enough to impact the reader. amazingally written

5/5

This is a beautifully written, sad poem. I loved the deep emotion that I was able to feel. You gave an excellent description of a girl who was truly at the end of her ropes. 5/5
Keep writing I love your work.

Love
Letty

Another well writen poem about suicide. However, it is a very popular topic, and I have read many of them. This seem like most I have read, with a different scenario. As an individual poem, this is done rather well. For creativity and originality, it doesn't do that well. But you are indeed a talented writer.

Another great poem by a great writer, keep up the great job, and like always nothing less than a perfect 5 as u really deserve it

This was extremley sad, i really enjoyed this one, keep writing
xxxxxx

Great poem
It flows very well and is still interesting after every stanza.
I'm a sucker for sad poems who are about death.
Good write.

5/5