Awwww....for one I love the title..it seems like a Logo for something haha...this breaks my heart really to know girls and guys go through love like this! :( best of luck in the future
-Krissey

P.S...could you read "Some kids dont play" Thanks

I thought it was well written, it flowed well and was nice to read
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Great as always Noni, I rarely have anything bad to say baout peoples poems becuz even if it's not the best it's from the heart and that makes it beautiful. But your's it not only from the heart, but it's also an excellent poem with great flow and it's quite enjoyable to read. thank you for giving me the opportunity to read your poems, tey're truly a pleasure.

Wow that sounded REALLY formal like a funeral. UR POEMS ROX OFF MY SOX SO KEEP UM COMING LADY!!!!!!!! There, that sounds more like me! lol

Ravyn

Great work, i loved "Diamonds may last, but hearts can die
Diamonds glow on, but love fades by...", it flows really nicely!

This is a a really sad poem, I really liked it. I think the way you described diamonds and your love, was very original. My favorite part is the second stanza, it's beautifully sad.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby

THe way you used diamonds to compare to love made complete sense! I love it.......good job!