Yes, I woke up in a car

by Krissey   Jun 24, 2006


My head hurt so badly
I placed my hand over my head
I realize I'm in a car
Where was my home and bed?

A storm is raging on outside
Lightning flashes across the sky
A clap of thunder follows
I see a shadow moving around nearby

I could see trees out the window
I scooted up on the leather seat
This headache was killing me
I was overwhelmed by massive heat

Everything started to spin
When I saw a man beside the car
I could not supress my screams
As I looked at his massive, face-long scar

I locked both of the doors
But he took out the keys
I was stunned on what to do
So I pulled my chest to my knees

He tightly grabbed my arm
And dragged me out into the rain
I was scared out of my mind
But calm I tried to remain

I seen a shed in the distance
It was old and run down
His tight grip was so unbearable
Not one person was around

I couldn't give up this easily
Through this pain I had to fight
This man was not going to hurt me
I would not be his victim tonight

I kicked where my mom told me to
Where it terribly hurts a man
I started running through the branches
Putting together a plan

Maybe I could find a place to hide
And wait there till I was found
Suddenly I felt him grab my ankle
I fell helplessly to the muddy ground

Then he pulled out that knife
I seen it from the corner of my eye
Just when I thought he'd take my life
I heard a rumble from the sky

I shut my eyes to avoid the blood
But for some reason, opened them once more
I was back inside my car and looked out the window
To see that man outside my door

I knew the dream was now to become real
My future was to decrease or expand
It was flashing before my eyes
And in the killers hands

If you've read this before...Chelsey and Kristy wrote it..this is our new account! Hope you liked!

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  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Yes, very good. Well done. A second chance, to calmly deal with a situation is always welcomed.. lol.. Excellent write, though. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This is a great poem and u desribed it very well.
    *~`Stephanie`~*
    P.S.
    I would apprecitate if u would look at my poem I Live Life! under Stephanie.
    Thanks!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Julissa

    Omq i Loved it... ya should have a part two, cause i get mad when poems leave me expectinq for more... LoL !

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    I thought this was really well done. It was indeed sad and quite dark as well.
    'I seen a shed in the distance'
    I think seen should be saw
    'I seen it from the corner of my eye'
    Once again, I think seen should be saw.
    Other then those two points, the poem was amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    Brilliant Brilliant. That about sums it up.

    xoxoxo Haley