Brilliant Brilliant. That about sums it up.

xoxoxo Haley

I thought this was really well done. It was indeed sad and quite dark as well.
'I seen a shed in the distance'
I think seen should be saw
'I seen it from the corner of my eye'
Once again, I think seen should be saw.
Other then those two points, the poem was amazing.

Omq i Loved it... ya should have a part two, cause i get mad when poems leave me expectinq for more... LoL !

This is a great poem and u desribed it very well.
*~`Stephanie`~*
P.S.
I would apprecitate if u would look at my poem I Live Life! under Stephanie.
Thanks!!!

Yes, very good. Well done. A second chance, to calmly deal with a situation is always welcomed.. lol.. Excellent write, though. xx