Good work. It's a very true poem. People usually don't do what they know is right, and they are going to evenually ruin their lives.

'I ask him to look at the people of the world'
I think him should be Him

I really like this. It's very true, which makes it even better.

Heyyy ladies, you need to edit out all the nonsense that replace the apostrophe!.. awesome stuff though :)

Wowgreat poem iv read some of your other poems you are both amazing writers together plzplzplz keep wrting iv added you too my faves =]
your amazing
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lovelove
Alice
xxxxxxx

Why's it written twice?

This is very powerful, as a piece. Yes, your Christianity shines through. There are some that follow the same path as you, though, and still end up with scars.. Believe me.. However, I really really liked the message conveyed, and love the use of some of your words, as a way of showing that people have choices, and how they choose to use them is entirely up to them, but not to complain if their lives end up awry.. Very well done. xx

Yeah ur right! its my pleasure that u have given some of your opinion w/ my poem thanks...well honestly i appreciate it and i do like your poems very nice...