Omg that was an excellent poem i really liked it but i hope its not actually about u if so i am so sorry i give it 5/5 though

Very good poem keep up the work!
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Keep your head up.i know it will be hard but you have to do it.ive noticed from your story and mine its always the one person u love and care about the most.This is a sad but beatiful poem.keep up the good work.5/5

Omg! that poem was amazing! 5/5 i realy hope it wasnt true but if so i can relate something similar happened to me but awesome poem!

Wow this poem is very sad but very good.

Really sad poem :( I'm so sorry, I dont no what u r going thru. But I know it wouldnt be easy.
5/5

Like i said it gives me the shivers.
but i really like it.

Wow This Poem Had Tons Of Emotion It It..It Was Sad Yet Good....I Really Hope Your Ok...I Read Your Post If You Need Someone To Talk To My Msn Is Xthesetearsfalldownlikerainx@hotmail.com and my aim is xbr0k3ndr3amzzx feel free to im me or even email me im always here for you
Anyways 5/5 brilliant poem
Love,
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I can see that you poured your heart and soul into this poem and that alone deserves the highest praise.

The man in this poem is an animal, nothing more, even if this poem is not based on personal experience he is still very much a real person, his kind need to be hunted down and punished.

sorry for the rant but this is something i feel very strongly about.

The poem itself was excellent for lack of a better word and very moving, im actualy choked up, very well done.
5/5

Im really sorry about your ordeal. This was a good poem. But im sorry for what you had to go through.

Ari... you know I love you and am here for you... the stuff that happens cant be regretted... or even forgotten... but you must use it to make yourself strong... I love ya kid!

Franklin James

This poem indeed tells a horrible and sad truth, i admire your strength for writing this, for expressing such a crime is something not easily done. i feel the saddness and desperation in this poem.

GothicSorrow, The Bride of White Rabbit