by Sorefromreality Jun 24, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Your body i will never again get to hold |
by Tripp
Short, but literally gushing emotion...great job, keep it up. just keep looking for someone new, don't slave after one guy. I understand how it can be hard, but you've gotta keep trying... |
by Ike Dizzle
This is like a bitter/sweet situation. Great poem. 5/5 |
Good poem! Its like sad/sweet, good combination. |
Great job, its a simple short poem but it conveys a lot of feelings and emotion. |
by Tammie
This is a really good short poem. I'm used to your poems being long, and this shows you can also create a really great short poem too. Really great show of emotion. Thanks for the comments they mean alot to me.. Keep up the great work. |