Dear Bhavin
I'm sorry for not checking this work earlier. It's beautifully described and very well written. The idea that you wish to convey - that one's death is not the end of troubles is a very different way of looking at things.

Just a few corrections: "With an intention to carry his morgue" is wrong usage. Morgue is a place where the bodies are kept. What might be more appropriate is "With an intention to carry him to the morgue"

His kin was performing... should rather be "His kin were performing".

thanks a lot for the tribute.

All the best and peace always

shobhana

Dear Bhavin,

thanks a lot for your kind words. How come you are not writing anymore? please do. am waiting to read your next piece of work!

good luck and peace
shobhana

This has a good flow and a good rhyme scheme.Moreso. it carries emotion and is a unique elegy.Very well written.I too, appreciate and think that Shobhana Kumar is a very good poet.
P.S.-Thank you for the comments on my work.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka